READ THIS REVIEW
Okay, if they author gets to read this, READ IT. (I'll e-mail it also. This is important.)
This flash movie sucks and is great. Let's get a full review right here.
One: The movie moves a slow. Don't try and drag out a joke. (Like when he talks about the map, end it where the purple guy says "it went 'I'm a map, I'm a map,' It got kinda old there)
Two: Diffrent background. waaay to basic.
Three: New music. I don't care how much you liked it. It sucked.
Four: Your sound sucked. Fix the microphone, or, my suggestion, don't get so close to it. Seriously. Oh, and try getting your friends to do voices. It has more effect when you get main charactors done by diffrent people.
On a good note, it was funny. It mean seriously, you could have worded it a little better but it WAS pretty funny. I mean I laughed when I overlooked your poor style. You have potential. I look forward to part two, but you need to work REALLY HARD on it. Here's a suggestion, redo this one, but look at what I said take a few weeks on it. Great movies aren't made in a couple days.