Patricoo's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the apple orchard]

Oh...god that was a wonderful story.

Oh man I can relate. *sigh* It seems to easy.

Anyways, it's an amazing art style. It really is! I'm honored to be one of the people to protect something like this. It gets extra points for everything, except the cursing.

Take out the the cursing in it. It's a great story...just strike out the language. It actually takes away from it.

[Final Fantasy Day Care 1]

well drawn.

Actually, i was well done graphically, but I didn't find it too funny. Faster paced works.

[There she is!!!]

Yey!

I do love this much!

[-Drop the Bomb-]

oh thats cool.

I love the syncing. The colors, everything. Very well done! I'm really impressed! Kickass job! I don't get Kirby though.

Cryokenetic responds:

C'mon! It's Kirby! -_^

But I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

[how to tie a tie]

Seems mediocue

It seemed a bit slow paced and not entirely funny, but it had good animation and effort shows so why blam?

[D03]

cool but short

It's very well done but it lacks a sufficant amount of length! Add on more!

[RL: 10 Second Insanity]

surprised me

The quality surpised me. I was expecting poor stuff. Nice job on animation.

Trine responds:

Thanks dude! <3!
-Sandman0277
Nick nack paddy whack give the dog a bone!
-BlackcherryLock

[Gallio - Fishing]

It's true.

It's true. I love the choice of background as well.

Donate! I have through diffrent sources!

[Wet As Blood]

mediocure.

Not bad, but the whole this is mediocure at best. Everything flows well so it's far from blamming.

And that ninja could use an inhalur

[Ascension Protocol]

Amatureness shows but potential is amazing

That was very well done. Though your lack of experience shows, it also shows that you have unlimited potential that you can be better with only time.

More specificly, the messige and song are a great choice and though the detail isn't huge, the effort is amazing. For a first flash movie I can only image how much time and effort this took to complete.

You should keep working and get yourself known. It's good to get stuff on Newgrounds for getting yourself judged, but it's rare you'll ever really be noticed because of all the other people along side you. I reccomend submitting this to flashplayer dot com, or do a better one later and give that a shot.

And to everyone else and about the messige, you'll agree with it wholeheartedly, but will you follow it?

Introspection101 responds:

Hey, thanks. It did take forever to finish this because I had to learn everything as I did it. Plus, I just had to pick a music video for my first one. Gees, that made things complicated. I think I'll try my hand at some humor next.