Patricoo's Reviews

[Jungle]

Lemme guess..

lemme guess... the black cloud from 'Lost'?

[StickStart]

Unoriginal, but not bad.

You fail really to do anything orignal. Stick fighting, random teleporting, nonsensical violence, all the same.

Regaurdless, the animation is smooth and effort shows through. You have alot of white space that needs to be colored or shaded in, but it's not bad. Do better, take more time and come up with something that either involves a plot or a more solid story. I believe you can do it! Don't waste time on such silly little animations. You could make a great movie one day!

[Alien Man Sam]

Thats pretty funny, and thats it.

It's short, funny, good sound and background music. Moves quickly and is a nice comic-sized animation. It really isn't much else. Just a moment to enjoy a wierd and random moment. Good job and good humor! Your a funny guy and a good voice actor!

[Ragnapets 2]

Good game!

This is an excellent game thats both fun to play and well planned. It has a good use of sprites and decent options, but unfortunatly draggs on it a bit.

I wish there were better looking options and more stats and options for your monster. Training after a while gets kind of droll. But that doesn't take away from the detail done in the choice of music (Hot Shots Golf?) and the sprite usage.

Well done, but it could use more.

motmot3 responds:

Thanks!! you are the first who comment this game. thank you for your comment hehe

[Hungry Skater!]

It requires work and experience.

The graphics and animation worked well and smoothly, but you still need to figure some stuff out.

Of course I know already your just playing around with the actionscript or whatever, and good. Just learn a bit. For one, the over laps seem to have some issues. I think you have it over laping groups, not the image itself. Secondly, I can skate off into the nothingness forever. You should set a boundry. Some fixes here and there and you can eventually figure out levels and menu screens. Great potential!

[-Pacman's Revenge-]

SAme except,

Same thing as the last guy, except I was more inclined to give you a protection. Excellent idea using the 'Fishy' game thing, but it was very poor. Also, it looks like when objects over lap, they over lap the Grouping square instead of the object itself. It's a sign of a lower quality actionscript.

Try to make pac-man lose when he overlaps the ghost itself, not the right corner near the ghost.

Seandadj responds:

yeah i was just testing the system and thought it was decent so i submitted it, thanks for the review and ill try to fix that up shortly :)